Your first page makes all the difference; it grabs your reader's attention and can be the difference between a "yes" and a no" when it comes to agents and editors. More and more, with attention spans pulled in every direction, publishers are eager to see conflict and stakes from the beginning, yet so many writers fail to show this early enough in a story to hook readers.
In these one-hour sessions (with a max of four students), teachers will give feedback on up to 350 words. We ask that students submit their first page one week in advance of the session; each session's instructor contact details can be found in the confirmation email. Please note that your work will be shared with the other students in the session. We offer first page feedback sessions for novels, short stories, and personal essays. Space is limited, so we encourage you to sign up early to secure your spot.
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